Monthly Archive for May, 2006

Jack Brammer Back At Work

State government reporter Jack Brammer has returned to his job after a random check of his stories over the past two years revealed no additional examples of using under his by-line material originally published in another newspaper.  The inquiry was conducted after Brammer last week used, almost verbatim, two paragraphs of background material that appeared the previous day in a story in The Courier-Journal of Louisville.

Brammer has apologized to the Courier-Journal reporter and explained that he inadvertently lifted the paragraphs by “cutting and pasting” an electronic version of the C-J story into his working file of notes. The Herald-Leader regrets the error.

Marilyn Thompson

Editor      

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Who Writes Those Derby Headlines?

The Kentucky Derby is over, and Herald-Leader newsroom staffers are catching their breath.  Derby is one of the busiest and most fun times of the year, with lots of extra coverage in the regular paper and two 18-page special sections.  This year, we also produced some terrific photo, audio and multimedia reports on kentucky.com.

Something that always attracts readers’ attention are the big headlines on the Sports front Saturday and the Sunday special section. Those are the work of copy editors, who help put together the paper each night. It’s often a collaborative effort, especially on the sports desk, which also produces those kind of headlines for big sporting events throughout the year. The copy editors often don’t have a lot of time to come up with something, as deadlines don’t wait for inspiration.  Editors throw out ideas, and others try to improve upon them.  They try to be fresh and creative, incorporating the name of the winning horse and, if possible, something about how he won the race.  Puns and alliteration rule the day. Past Derby headlines have included: "Charismagic" (Charismatic in 1999), "Cide Swiped" (Funny Cide in 2003), "Smarty’s Party" (Smarty Jones in 2004), and "Holy Giacomoly!" (Giacomo in 2005).

My favorite Derby week headline this year was written by sports copy editor Tawana Brown for Lemons Forever’s long-shot win in the Kentucky Oaks: "Lemony Ticket."  This year’s Sunday headline was "Barbaro’s Roses," by copy desk chief Brian Throckmorton.  It wasn’t the unanimous choice of those of us still hanging around the newsroom as the 11:10 p.m. deadline approached, but that’s often the case when odd horse names don’t easily suggest a catchy headline.

What else was under consideration?  Here are some of the ideas staff members proposed Saturday night:

Barbaro Go!
Barbaro Rolls!
Barbarolls!
Hi Ho Barbaro!
Barbaro’s Coast
Barbaro Breaks Away
Barbaro d’Ville
Barb-Wired
Barbaro Bar None

Do you think we chose the right one?  Do you have a better idea?

Tom Eblen
Managing Editor

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A Case of Accidental Plagiarism

In the electronic age, it has become easier than ever for reporters to inadvertently fall into the plagiarism trap. Here’s the easiest way: a writer struggling under deadline refers to supplemental electronic material from other websites or wire postings. He or she uses the “cut and paste” function to bring material into a story draft, usually intending to thoroughly rewrite the borrowed section before turning the story into an editor.  Of course, once borrowed copy perverts a writer’s original file, anything can happen. With the clock ticking and editors demanding copy, sometimes even the most trusted reporters slip up.

State government reporter Jack Brammer fell into this trap last week when he was writing a Friday front-page story about Gov. Ernie Fletcher and a letter the governor wrote to university presidents about their vetoed capital projects. In preparing the story, Jack copied into his work file earlier stories from the Associated Press and the Louisville Courier-Journal as well as notes from his interviews that afternoon with the governor and others. As he hurriedly worked his way through the file, he left intact two paragraphs of background material lifted almost verbatim from the C-J. Jack’s story went to press with the “borrowed” material under his by-line. The next day, an editor at the C-J brought the matter to the attention of Herald-Leader editors.

Brammer accepted full responsibility for his actions, attributing the mistake to pure sloppiness. He has been suspended pending a more thorough examination of his prolific work product over the past few years. He also has written a letter of apology to the C-J reporter and her editors.

Brammer’s main concern was that his mistake would reflect unfavorably on the reputation of the Herald-Leader. Like all newspaper staffers, we want our readers to know that they can trust what we write and that we have not taken shortcuts in our writing or reporting. We will keep you posted on the results of this inquiry and we, along with Jack, apologize for this unfortunate mistake.   

Marilyn Thompson

Editor

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Behind The Story of a Soldier’s Funeral

Several readers have contacted us to compliment Amy Wilson on her story last Friday about the funeral of Sgt. Robert Ehney, who was killed in Iraq.  Amy joined our staff last year after many years as a reporter for larger newspapers, most recently the Orange County Register in California.  Despite having covered all kinds of stories, Amy said she was especially moved by this one. I asked her to share her thoughts about it with you:

"I guess I did not really know what to expect, going in, so I was a blank slate except for my advance knowledge of the war itself and the particulars of how Sgt. Ehney had died. I drove up to the Kerr Brothers Funeral Home and was immediately surprised to see a phalanx of flags and what looked to be veterans lining the street and the entrance. I was a half-hour early and already the contingent from Fort Knox was there, as were the Blue Star Mothers. I barely got a parking place.

"I walked into something equally astonishing. I saw the pictures of the Rob as a boy and then I saw his four-year-old son walk through to the family section. No one could have been unaffected by the juxtaposition of Rob’s life and Rob’s death. I sat in the back, out of respect as I did not know Rob, and took notes. Then we were to all continue to Camp Nelson National Cemetery.

"Nothing had prepared me for the way average Kentuckians behaved when they saw the cortege. I simply could not believe my eyes. It wasn’t just that no traffic dared to pass the line of funeral cars or that no one honked in impatience. It was just this very spontaneous and sincere show of respect for this boy who, I’m guessing, was nameless to them. It was just that his body had come their way — flanked as it was by military escorts, paramilitary squadrons of motorcyclists and hundreds of flags — and they reacted, each in their own way, to the sight.

"The only thing I could do, I knew, was write a story which would describe precisely that. And I guess I realized that the story of a soldier’s death was not something that happened to other people and over there. It was among us and we — all of us — know it."

Tom Eblen
Managing Editor

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What Coverage and Play is Appropriate?

A story in Thursday’s paper, headlined “Disrobing for dollars: Exotic dancers seek Louisville gigs about now for the big bucks,” generated a lot of feedback from readers, most of it negative. The story was accompanied on the front page by a photo of two clothed exotic dancers taking a break on the stage of a Louisville nightclub. Inside was a second photo, showing a dancer quoted in the story wearing slightly more clothing than a skimpy bathing suit.

More than two dozen readers contacted us to complain about the story. Most of the complaints had two themes:

1. We shouldn’t write about strip clubs or other things that reflected "negatively" on Kentucky, especially during Derby week.

2. We shouldn’t have put the story and photo on the front page where children might read it, especially because newspapers are used in schools.

One of the newsroom editors who planned this year’s Derby coverage, Dori Hjalmarson, explained it well in this response to an angry reader’s e-mail:

"I think your points about the play of the story — centerpiece with color photos on the front page — are valid. We did consider those points before printing the story, and several people in our newsroom raised the same concerns you did: that children who read this newspaper should be shielded from the sex industry and that the story was written in a way that made no moral distinction between stripping and other businesses.

"But the story was reflecting reality: The sex industry — a big-money business — follows major entertainment events like the Super Bowl, NASCAR and, yes, the Kentucky Derby. Strip clubs are legal; they pay taxes; they are part of the business boom that comes to Louisville every year. We are not the first newspaper to record this phenomenon. …

"I have to tell you it disturbs me that we do not get nearly the outraged  response when we put far more disturbing news on the front page — news such as that of soldiers dying, children being abused in foster care, the elderly killed by their caretakers. People seem to be far more uncomfortable telling their children about legal activities such as stripping than they are with the true suffering of their fellow human beings.

"That said, you are right in that we could have done the stripper story  differently. We could have placed it inside the newspaper without full-color photos; we could have written the story in a way that draws a distinction between stripping and other more seemly businesses. We’re not idiots; we’re not callous. We considered the feelings of others before we acted. I believe the story we printed is a valid one, even if our presentation of it offended some people."

Whether or not you agree with our decision to publish “Disrobing for dollars,” or the way it was presented, one thing is for sure: It inspired a spirited debate. And that’s a good thing.

Marilyn Thompson, Editor
Tom Eblen, Managing Editor

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New Online Kentucky Derby Coverage

The Herald-Leader, as always, will be devoting a lot of resources to coverage of the Kentucky Derby. This year, though, we have developed a plan for Derby coverage online that will offer readers some new ways to experience Derby week.

We will be providing daily photo slide shows from the backside of Churchill Downs, sports columnist John Clay will be blogging throughout the week, and we’ll be offering the latest news as it happens. Starting Wednesday, sports reporter Alicia Wincze will produce a daily podcast that covers the events at the track.  Multimedia slide shows of compelling Derby stories will be available. We’ll also have a panoramic view of the backside of Churchill Downs that will allow readers to use their mouse to take a look for themselves.

On kentucky.com, you’ll also find an interactive guide to Churchill and tips for betting that can be downloaded and taken with you. You can relive last year’s Derby, Preakness and Belmont races through an interactive replay that shows where the winners made key moves and how the field changed as the races progressed. Another interactive feature of each race includes silks and jockey pictures.

On Derby Day, we’ll again bring you all the latest news at the top of our homepage. But look for other special features. We will be posting photo slide shows on Derby fashion and celebrities throughout the day. For the race itself, we will have a slide show from the start to the winner’s circle that will include sound and the call of the race.  We’ll also be providing audio clips of interviews with the winning owner, trainer and jockey.

Mike Johnson

Deputy Managing Editor

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More Honors for Herald-Leader Staff

A high school principal I know once told me: "Your job is a lot like mine. Nobody calls because they’re happy about something."  Yes, I get my share of complaints from Herald-Leader readers.  But it was refreshing at the Bluegrass Festival of Books to have several people mention how much they respect the newspaper and depend on the work Herald-Leader journalists do each day.

In the past month, we’ve also gotten a few more pats on the back from our colleagues.  The Society of Professional Journalists announced April 18 that the Herald-Leader had won two Green Eyeshade Awards. The contest honors the best in print, radio, television and online journalism in 11 Southern states.  The Herald-Leader won first place in business reporting for the series “Win, Lose or Draw” by Bill Estep, John Stamper and Linda Blackford. Their project, edited by Sharon Walsh, examined the effectiveness and oversight of Kentucky’s economic development efforts.  Also, Larry Dale Keeling won third place in the serious commentary category for “Death & Corruption.”

Tom Eblen
Managing Editor

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